so, my dearest McCabe~ had this idea~ write 30 poems in 30 days.
here's my first, be gentle :)
"the beginning"
broken wide open
battered
bleeding
soft spoken
fighting
escaping
bruised
afraid
alone
scarred
this was just the beginning.
bare with me, i haven't written poetry since high school!
xo.
e.
"the beginning"
broken wide open
battered
bleeding
soft spoken
fighting
escaping
bruised
afraid
alone
scarred
this was just the beginning.
bare with me, i haven't written poetry since high school!
xo.
e.
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4 comments:
Ohhh... poetry... how about a Haiku? (The most common form for Haiku is three short lines. The first line usually contains five (5) syllables, the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line contains five (5) syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme. A Haiku must "paint" a mental image in the reader's mind.)
hugs from Hundewanderer
Hundewanderer~ is that your nice way of saying that what i wrote is not a poem :)
i'm workin on it
xo.
e.
p.s. i'm telling you~ i'm out of practice :)
Beautiful Erica, I love it! I'm glad things are transforming in your life... the upcoming fall is so good for transitions :) xxoo
Wow, great first shot! Very potent and real! Best of luck on the 30 in 30 venture, I'll be checking in for sure!
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